Tuesday, December 14, 2010
Caspian's writing
My Werewolf dragon spies on its prey with his dark black. He lives in a pitch black cave. Sometimes water droplets can form enormous puddels.
Sunday, August 15, 2010
Narratives
Blossom awoke one morning to hear constant sad squeals of Splat her beloved pet piglet. Quickly she dressed into her dressing gown and she was off down to the pigsty. In a flash she was running off to the sound of the frightened Splat in the distance. She immediatley sprang like a leopard and leapt down the road. Down ahead she could see the back of Mr. Scary the ghost floating fastly away to his gigantic castle."I'm going to get Splat back," Blossom whispered between pants.
Angrily Mr. Scary the ghost didn't look back. He was concentrating too much. Suddenly Blossom saw an old lady crossing the road. She quickly zoomed away from her. She focused back where she had last seen Mr. Scary. He wasn't there. He vanished! But where had he gone?
By Sophie
Angrily Mr. Scary the ghost didn't look back. He was concentrating too much. Suddenly Blossom saw an old lady crossing the road. She quickly zoomed away from her. She focused back where she had last seen Mr. Scary. He wasn't there. He vanished! But where had he gone?
By Sophie
Narratives
Sarah was flying around her house for fun, when she saw some fluffy clouds floating past. She thought it would be nice to have a rest but she did not check what direction the wind was going. She went to sleep on that cloud. When she awoke she was over her sister's castle. Then Sarah noticed what direction the wind was going. She saw the monkeys carrying people. She immediatley understood.
She had to do something but what? Then suddenly, "zoom!" Down came a monkey heading straight for her. She quickly flew back home that night. She thought about what had happened. Next morning, she flew to the castle and set all the people free. Then she and the people bombed the castle and exposed her mean sister and castle but by then her servants were gone.
By Rebecca
She had to do something but what? Then suddenly, "zoom!" Down came a monkey heading straight for her. She quickly flew back home that night. She thought about what had happened. Next morning, she flew to the castle and set all the people free. Then she and the people bombed the castle and exposed her mean sister and castle but by then her servants were gone.
By Rebecca
Narratives
Drako needs help!
It was a sunny day. The girls were taking a stroll through the woods. Then suddenly a terrible screech came across the land! The girls followed it and it lead them to a high brick wall and there at the bottom was a wailing dragon. "The poor thing's hurt," cried Clair with a drop rolling from her eye.
"Don't worry, we will help" said Poppy in a voice like I don't know how. Then they sat there making daisy chains. "Well we have to do something about him," shouted Clair!
By Cailin
It was a sunny day. The girls were taking a stroll through the woods. Then suddenly a terrible screech came across the land! The girls followed it and it lead them to a high brick wall and there at the bottom was a wailing dragon. "The poor thing's hurt," cried Clair with a drop rolling from her eye.
"Don't worry, we will help" said Poppy in a voice like I don't know how. Then they sat there making daisy chains. "Well we have to do something about him," shouted Clair!
By Cailin
Character descriptions
Cat man
Cat man was a super hero. he has a sword and a shield. He can walk up walls with his feet. His sword is silver and his sheild is the same. He has super powers.
By Tainui
Cat man was a super hero. he has a sword and a shield. He can walk up walls with his feet. His sword is silver and his sheild is the same. He has super powers.
By Tainui
Character descriptions
Luigi
Luigi is an ordinary boy at first. Then he gets kidnapped and becomes evil. Now he tries to rule the universe.
By Devon.
Luigi is an ordinary boy at first. Then he gets kidnapped and becomes evil. Now he tries to rule the universe.
By Devon.
Tuesday, August 3, 2010
Character descriptions
Fat Pig
Fat Pig is so fat that he can barely walk. He has a big bald spot on his head. He is a male. He is 2505 years, 11 months, 30 days and 23 hours old. He is half warewolf. Whe he turns into a warewolf his tummy drags along the ground behind him. Whe he is a human his weight is 20 tonnes! His warewolf weight is 200 wolfeywounds (a woofeywound is 500kg). He has a really humoungous bald spot on his back when he is a warewolf.
By Sam
Fat Pig is so fat that he can barely walk. He has a big bald spot on his head. He is a male. He is 2505 years, 11 months, 30 days and 23 hours old. He is half warewolf. Whe he turns into a warewolf his tummy drags along the ground behind him. Whe he is a human his weight is 20 tonnes! His warewolf weight is 200 wolfeywounds (a woofeywound is 500kg). He has a really humoungous bald spot on his back when he is a warewolf.
By Sam
Character descriptions
Miss Tradhill
This is a story about Miss Tradhill. She is a young lady who gives chocoalate to children and takes them home with her. But when she gets home she turns into a hideous old lady, the size of a hippopotomus with warts all over her face. She has an old black hat and a walking stick. She has a big pot so she can eat children with beer for breakfast, lunch and dinner. If she can't get a child she eats the insects in her house.
She has a dungeon full of cages for chidren. They try to attachk Miss Tradhill like a racoon stack in a rubbish bin. but she's too fast and gobbles them up. Warning: do not go looking for Miss Tradhill because she might eat you!
By Brynn
This is a story about Miss Tradhill. She is a young lady who gives chocoalate to children and takes them home with her. But when she gets home she turns into a hideous old lady, the size of a hippopotomus with warts all over her face. She has an old black hat and a walking stick. She has a big pot so she can eat children with beer for breakfast, lunch and dinner. If she can't get a child she eats the insects in her house.
She has a dungeon full of cages for chidren. They try to attachk Miss Tradhill like a racoon stack in a rubbish bin. but she's too fast and gobbles them up. Warning: do not go looking for Miss Tradhill because she might eat you!
By Brynn
Character descriptions
Ugly Greedy Pig
His name is ugly greedy pig. Everyday he eats a whole chicken that weighs 10kg. At night he turns into a half ware-pig. He's got a tiny face and huge teeth. During the day he turns into a very good person.
By Liam
His name is ugly greedy pig. Everyday he eats a whole chicken that weighs 10kg. At night he turns into a half ware-pig. He's got a tiny face and huge teeth. During the day he turns into a very good person.
By Liam
Character descriptions
Hazel
Hazel has the most amazing hazel eyes. Her face glitters a silver glitter in sunlight.
Hazel's hair is as wavy as spaghetti. In her hair she has big, bold, black and white bows. She is flexible like a spiarl. Her nails are long and has black nailpolish with a shade of green and blue.
Written by Hahna
Hazel has the most amazing hazel eyes. Her face glitters a silver glitter in sunlight.
Hazel's hair is as wavy as spaghetti. In her hair she has big, bold, black and white bows. She is flexible like a spiarl. Her nails are long and has black nailpolish with a shade of green and blue.
Written by Hahna
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Bee Facts
A honey bee is an insect.
Honey bees have a stinger on the abdomen.
Honey bees have 4 wings.
Honey bees have 6 legs.
Bees live in a muddy hive to protect other insects.
By Lily
Honey bees have a stinger on the abdomen.
Honey bees have 4 wings.
Honey bees have 6 legs.
Bees live in a muddy hive to protect other insects.
By Lily
I discovered... by Adam
I was strolling around with mum. I could see lots of houses ''mum whats that right there?''
"What Adam?" "
That thing mum, that brown and green thing."
I wondered if was an alien's luck thingamododle. Suddenly Mum had picked it up.
Mum do not do it. It was too late. Mum had picked it up.
Dun dun dun da!
"What Adam?" "
That thing mum, that brown and green thing."
I wondered if was an alien's luck thingamododle. Suddenly Mum had picked it up.
Mum do not do it. It was too late. Mum had picked it up.
Dun dun dun da!
Thursday, April 29, 2010
The Cheetah
The yellow and black spotted cheetah is running quickly through the thick dark jungle. It's very hungry and it is looking for a deer meat. His sharp, eager eyes spots something moving.
Written by Zhe-Yu, Liam and Abharan.
Written by Zhe-Yu, Liam and Abharan.
Super verbs and amazing adjectives
The muddy dog is running on the new white couch. (Adam)
The skiny blue cat is sitting on the colourful mat. (Acacia)
The stinky fat cat is snorin on the smelly brown mat. (Abharan)
The cute persian cat is sitting comfortably on the mat. (Cailin)
The skiny blue cat is sitting on the colourful mat. (Acacia)
The stinky fat cat is snorin on the smelly brown mat. (Abharan)
The cute persian cat is sitting comfortably on the mat. (Cailin)
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
5 interesting facts - Who am I?
- My favourite is pizza hut.
- I like gardening.
- I like building.
- I hit a home run last term.
- I am super good at maths.
Who am I?
5 interesting facts - Who am I?
Ko au?
1. I like Jiu-Jitsu.
2.I like riding my dads 4 wheeler.
3 I like swiming.
4.I like my psp.
5.I like doing jump on my bike.
6. I went to fiji.
WHO AM I?
1. I like Jiu-Jitsu.
2.I like riding my dads 4 wheeler.
3 I like swiming.
4.I like my psp.
5.I like doing jump on my bike.
6. I went to fiji.
WHO AM I?
5 interesting facts - Who am I?
- My greatgrandad fought in the WWI.
- I like to go to the B.M.X. park.
- I did part of the railtrail.
- I have been in the St Clair Surf Life Saving Club since I was four.
- If I was full irish my name would be called Áine Ó cinniede.
WHO AM I?
Thursday, March 4, 2010
Creative writing
My Trip to the FutureBoom! Wee! Up, up, up to the future. Warning, astorid feild ahead. Ahh!I have to go down. Ahh!
What? Where am I?
"You are in the future of course."
"Ahhh! A talking robot."
"Ahh! A talking kid."
"Wow I never knew that robots existed. Cool! What is your name?"
"10.Z0. What is your name?"
"George.
Oh no. My spaceship is dead."
"It's ok. My firend will fix it."
"But how long will it take?"
"About 10 years or maybe 100 years," said the robot.
"What? Brrr, its cold in here." Suddenly, Boom! Kill, kill... noooo!
To be continued... dum, da, da, da.
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Creative writing
My Pet lionMy pet lion, Fluffy Bum is 5 years old and he eats 1 and a half cows. I got him in the exotic animal part of the pet shop when he was just 3 weeks old.When he was one, I had to take him to the vet to have his teeth made flat. Last week he walked into the wadrobe and didn't come back.
By Sam.
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